Critical Evaluation of first draft of front cover

The choice of font does work well, though the main coverline is, as mentioned, hard to read from a distance, and the font I created for it does not work very well, though the other fonts are very clear. The background is just a plain black colour which was intended, though it does make it hard to see the darker colours used on the page, therefore I believe that I will need to either change the background or lighten the other colours. The title/masthead is easy to read, as there is a lot of colour differentiation to create a visible shape, especially with the splashes of white.
There is a barcode, as well as the issue number and pricing, though it is a little harder to read the issue number due to little contrast in colour. I do believe that it looks like a music magazine front cover, however it does need to be brightened to ensure professionalism. I think that the only problem with the desired appearance would be the overall darkening of the colours once printed, which can be countered with a brightness effect over every layer.